Talk:Irene Morales/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 14:26, 6 January 2015 (UTC)

I'll work on this review over the next several days. --Coemgenus (talk) 14:26, 6 January 2015 (UTC)

Checklist

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Sorry for the delay in starting this review. Here we go:
 * Early life
 * Where you say "aged only 11", it reads a little awkwardly. Maybe "at age 11" or "at 11 years old". The "only" is probably unnecessary -- we're all thinking it, anyway!
 * Done.
 * I'm guessing there's nothing in the sources about the name of her first husband?
 * Not in any sources I've found.
 * Military service
 * "...to revenge her husband." I think "to avenge her husband" is the correct way to say this.
 * I suppose it sounds a bit antiquated, changed it.
 * "...to concern herself with caring for the wounded." could probably just be "to care for the wounded." couldn't it?
 * Done.
 * Later life and legacy
 * "both conservative and left-wing" Seems like this might be better as "both right- and left-wing" or, given the climate, "both conservative and socialist". Having the two terms match, in other words.
 * I think conservative is the accurate description of the said womens' movements, and I'm not sure socialist is accurate for their counterparts, so I'd rather keep it as is.
 * OK, it's fine.
 * That's all I have. This was a nice little article, and I enjoyed reading it. --Coemgenus (talk) 14:00, 9 January 2015 (UTC)
 * This looks good to go. I'll pass it and update the lists accordingly. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:48, 11 January 2015 (UTC)