Talk:Irvine 11 controversy

Criminal Charges Section Line Removal
The following line was removed from the Criminal Charges section: "The MSU students had regularly hosted speakers who publicly supported Hamas, Islamic Jihad, and Hezbollah and that Jews controlled the media, courts, and US government. This may have influenced the university's decision to act decisively." (source) This statement feels irrelevant to the description of the events surrounding the criminal charges. If this information is to be anywhere in the article, it should be in the Suspension by the University section. Additionally, I think it would be more appropriate to adjust the phrasing to adopt a more neutral voice, as well as opting for quotes and information from supportive sources to present the supportive talking points in a neutral way. As the line currently reads, it feels like the article itself is speculating in a way contrary to wikipedia's NPOV policy. Grackletheory (talk) 22:13, 13 December 2023 (UTC)