Talk:Isaac Okoro/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:49, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Okoro played basketball for McEachern High School in Georgia for four years. As a senior, he helped McEachern win the state championship and achieve national success." - consider merging these two sentences and shortening them accordingly

Early life

 * "When he was seven to eight years old," - was around seven to
 * "and grew up in the outskirts of metro Atlanta." - and was raised close to metro Atlanta.

High school career

 * "Okoro played basketball for" - played high school basketball
 * "His team closed the regular season" - ended
 * "and receiving a No. 1 national ranking" - No.
 * Delink Sharife Cooper because he is already linked in the previous subsection
 * "Okoro was named to the MaxPreps All-American second team" - not mentioned by USA Today. Please find another source that explicitly states this information

College career

 * "The following game, he had 17 points" - attained
 * "Okoro did not play in a game against Missouri on February 15" - in a February 15 game against Missouri
 * Wikilink hamstring injury
 * "Okoro was named SEC Freshman of the Week" - spell out SEC out in full and put the acronyms in parentheses
 * "he announced that he would test the waters for the" - please don't use idioms per MOS:IDIOM and state its literal meaning

National team career

 * Delink Argentina per MOS:OVERLINK