Talk:Ishmael/GA1

GA Reassessment
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I will do the GA Reassessment on this article as part of the GA Sweeps project. H1nkles (talk) 15:38, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

There is a lot of good information here. I do have some concerns that I'd like to bring up.
 * There are several templates on the article, I put one on but there are several more, some dating back to December 2008.  These need to be addressed.
 * The references look good though accessdates and publisher need to be on website refs.
 * From a content stand point I have some concerns about the "Islam" section. You quote Watt as saying that God saved Abraham from the burning bush.  I am not totally familiar with Islamic tradition but I know that it parallels Jewish tradition in many ways.  The only burning bush I know of is with Moses.  Is there a different burning bush with Abraham in the Islamic tradition?  I just want to be sure I'm reading it correctly.
 * Also the reference to Metzger and Coogan as professors of Religious Studies, usually also has where they are professors at, what university. I think it would be good to include that information.
 * Regarding that sentence, it is a stub paragraph (a one-sentence paragraph), which should be expanded, combined or removed. Is there any other elaboration on that subject?

Overall the article is really well-written and fine. I would just like to see a little work done on these issues in order to keep it at GA. I'll hold the article for a week, please contact me if you have any questions or need more time. H1nkles (talk) 16:14, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The article has been on hold for a week and no appreciable work has been done to address my concerns. I will therefore delist the article as it does not meet the current GA Criteria when it comes to adequate referencing.  H1nkles (talk) 15:19, 16 June 2009 (UTC)