Talk:Isidore Isou

Last paragraph POV?
"At present, Isou himself, in poor health, continues to work with great determination in his studio - looking back, but not at a particular moment, and not in such a way as to slow himself down."

Good to hear, but it does read like promotional material. KD Tries Again 16:36, 26 January 2007 (UTC)KD

opening para
i've removed the unreferenced assertion that lettrism " owed inspiration to Dada and Surrealism" Paki.tv 01:28, 18 September 2007 (UTC)

Hello My name is Nave
Isou was my family member. if anyone is interested in any such details or otherwise please contact me - nnavesh1@gmail.com

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Article overhaul
I went ahead and overhauled the entire article, removing much of its flowery language, organizing the information in sections and expanding the more important ones. I also added a lot of citations. I'm quite new and this is the largest amount of editing I've put into a single article, so I would really appreciate feedback or advice on how to further improve the page.

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