Talk:Islanded in a Stream of Stars

Terribly Written
I know everyone tends to screw things up on here, but I think this article is terribly written. It's not in chronological order, the sentences aren't that well formed, Gallen, Tory, Saul, and Ellen do not meet to debate about what to do with Anders and Anders is not the final cylon Ellen was. I'm going to make a few changes but I don't know everything about BSG, hopefully someone else can go through and edit anything I messed up or left out. Tydamann (talk) 18:28, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay, well I watched it again, and re-wrote the entire article in alot more detail. I think it was a bit too much for a plot, so I put it all under Synopsis, and gave a short summary of what the episode was about under the section plot. I also included a few things I wasn't sure about or comments here, if you got any answers please post them.

I added a couple of quotes directly from the show. I added a [sic]We[sic] thing but I don't think I used it properly. I used it to describe that Balta is trying to change the ship. But the direct quote from the episode is 'We are trying to change the ship' I wanted to show that baltar used the word WE (which might mean he is thinking of people other then himself, which would mean that he has changed) When I wrote about Kara and Sanders, I said 'the once cold hearted Kara..' that seems a little off, but I wanted to mention that she seems to have had a 180 turn on the whole cylon human relationship thing. Does anyone know what book (if it's a real one) that Adama is reading to Roslin (after Anders regain's 'consciousness')? Maybe it is a coincidence but the number of people killed in the explosion is 61, and Roslin's hand rolled cigarette is hidden on page 61. I can't remember the episode where Roslin talked about the cabin, and I'm too lazy to search it out. When I said Tigh is brought to the room where Anders is being held...it makes it sound like he is being held prisoner. I didn't really know how to describe the people who were with Batlar during his ceremony. I couldn't think of what the medallions on Adama's neck are, I know it's something to do with military rank, I just put wings. I'm not 100% sure that it was scottish bag pipe music, but it sounds like it to me (although I'm probably wrong) Tydamann (talk) 23:39, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The synopsis is really too long, see How to write a plot summary for more information and these two WP:GA articles Sometimes a Great Notion (Battlestar Galactica) and He That Believeth in Me to see what I mean. For these reasons I am going to cut down the plot summary, but if there is something I cut out that you really think should be included please let me know. Million_Moments (talk) 07:26, 10 March 2009 (UTC)