Talk:Islands (The xx song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 04:23, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this. &mdash; Simon (talk) 04:23, 14 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * their self-titled debut studio album xx ---> I don't think we need "xx" here
 * and is a dark and simple indie pop track that features house influences and instrumentation from guitars and synthesizers. Croft and Sim, ---> I think it should be divided into a separate sentence
 * Croft and Sim, who provide vocals in the track ---> Past simple?
 * ITunes Festival ---> Must be "iTunes"
 * ✅ all --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 07:05, 30 November 2013 (UTC)

Oops... So much sorry for delaying the review, here are the last comments:


 * Composition
 * heard in lines ---> which are heard...
 * 26 October 2009, --> remove the comma
 * ✅ all --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:19, 11 December 2013 (UTC)

The rest is fine, good work! &mdash; Simon (talk) 09:07, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! I have addressed the comments --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:19, 11 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. Congrats! &mdash; Simon (talk) 05:30, 13 December 2013 (UTC)