Talk:Ismail I/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seyyed (talk · contribs) 19:29, 19 July 2014 (UTC)

This article is clearly incomplete and does not cover major aspects of Ismail's life. More information should be added regarding the following issues:
 * Child: Ismael's life in Estakhr and Gilan
 * Campaigns in Iran:
 * Ismail's war against Aq Qoyunlu
 * Establishment of a new government in Tabriz
 * Wars against the local powers to unify Iran


 * Diplomatic relations with Mamluks of Egypt and Venice.
 * Religious policies including changing the official religion into Shia, leadership of Qizilbash, invitation of Arab Shia shcolars, etc.
 * Legacy: Establishment of new central government in Iran and unification of the country.
 * Criticism against Ismail's policies.

I hope you can add all of these information in the article.

There is no any improvement in the past 10 days. Thus, the article is failed.


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

GA nomination failed.-- Seyyed(t-c) 09:03, 1 August 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * Well referenced.
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * Well referenced.
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: -- Seyyed(t-c) 15:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: -- Seyyed(t-c) 15:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: -- Seyyed(t-c) 15:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail: -- Seyyed(t-c) 15:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)