Talk:Israel at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:14, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:14, 22 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "Alexandra Zaretsky and Roman Zaretsky also competed for Israel at the 2006 Winter Olympics.[4] Alexandra Zaretsky" Don't need two wikilinks to her article in the span of 20 words.
 * Yup  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * " He was 15.98" 15.98 what?
 * Ope  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Not sure the alpine skiing section works as three choppy paragraphs. Would be better as one solid?
 * Fair, I edit on a tablet so small paragraphs look longer.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Israel qualified two entrants in ladies singles and one in ice dancing, for a total of three athletes." Those one and two's should be reversed, I think.
 * Right, thanks  Kees08  (Talk)  

That's all I've got here. Courcelles (talk) 01:04, 23 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 13:22, 23 July 2018 (UTC)