Talk:Israel the Grammarian/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LT910001 (talk · contribs) 05:38, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

If there are no objections, I'll take this review. I'll note at the outset I've had no role in editing or creating this article. I welcome other editors at any stage to contribute to this review. I will spend a day familiarising myself with the article and then provide an assessment. While you wait, why not spare a thought for the other nominees, and conduct a review or two yourself? This provides excellent insight into the reviewing process, is enjoyable and interesting. A list can be found here Kind regards, LT910001 (talk) 05:38, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. I am on holiday and will be off wiki from 12 to 21 April, but will respond as soon as I can on my return. Dudley Miles (talk) 09:15, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

No problems, I am happy to wait for you to return. In conducting this review, I will:
 * Provide an assessment using WP:GARC
 * If this article does not meet the criteria, explain what areas need improvement.
 * Provide possible solutions that may (or may not) be used to fix these.

Commentary
Hi! Welcome back from your holiday, I hope you had a great time. I've yet to verify this article (as in, check some sources), which I'll do in a day or two, but this article will almost surely be promoted once that's done.

One small things it that it could use an infobox, as this article is about a person, and I like the context that an infobox gives. This is not something that 'must' be addressed.

Kind regards, --LT910001 (talk) 02:03, 22 April 2014 (UTC)


 * I had a brilliant holiday thanks. I went to Jordan and saw Petra. I have added an infobox. Is it OK? Dudley Miles (talk) 21:37, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
 * That's great to hear, sounds like a wonderful holiday. Yep, this article meets or exceeds the requirements for GA, so I am promoting it. Well done! --LT910001 (talk) 04:01, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

As an afternote, I think there may be an easier way to make citations - you might not be aware of it, it uses the sfn templates. Have a look at Madman's Drum, which I recently reviewed, to see how that's done. --LT910001 (talk) 04:01, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much. I will take a look at sfn. Dudley Miles (talk) 11:30, 23 April 2014 (UTC)