Talk:It's Elementary: Talking About Gay Issues in School/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: RunningTiger123 (talk · contribs) 03:48, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

I'll be back in a little while with my comments after reading the article and its sources. RunningTiger123 (talk) 03:48, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments: Overall, a really good article! RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:36, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * 1a
 * There are four sentences that I found use ... and it .... These sentences should either be split (with the and deleted), or a comma should be added before and to make a proper compound sentence.
 * The list New York, Madison, Wisconsin, Cambridge, Massachusetts, and San Francisco should use semicolons to separate the locations, i.e. New York; Madison, Wisconsin; Cambridge, Massachusetts; and San Francisco. This distinguishes the commas that simply divide cities and states.
 * Wikilink New York for consistency, and wikilink American Family Association at its first occurrence instead of its second.
 * 2a
 * Use a consistent author naming style in citations: First Last or Last, First, but not a mix. (I personally prefer the latter.)
 * 2b
 * Quote in second paragraph of Summary and background is from an unclear source; readers won't immediately know if it's from source 5 or 6.
 * Other comments: As a film, a link to the relevant IMDb page under an External links section might be helpful for readers.
 * I fixed the issues, but I used First Last for the references. SL93 (talk) 04:59, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries about that – consistency is the key thing. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:47, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Changes are all good; passing shortly. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:47, 2 March 2021 (UTC)