Talk:Italian battleship Duilio/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jackyd101 (talk · contribs) 10:47, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Passed GA
Hi there, I am happy to tell you that this article has passed GA without the need for any further improvement. Listed below is information on how the article fared against the good article criteria, with suggestions for future development. These are not required to achieve GA standard, but they might help in future A-class or FAC review process.--Jackyd101 (talk) 10:47, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 * It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Include a link to Occupation of Smyrna in the 1919 section.
 * The 1925 magazine explosion sounds like a big deal - was anyone killed? Was there an investigation into the cause?
 * You could clarify a little who Enrico Tellini was - as written he could be anybody. Perhaps "the murder of General Enrico Tellini and four others conducting a survey of the Greek-Albanian border for the League of Nations" provides more context.
 * There is no introduction to the Second World War - the article goes from peace to "Caio Duilio's first wartime patrol" without explanation. Perhaps "Following the Italian entry into World War II in June 1940, Caio Duilio's first wartime patrol . . ."
 * Give a date for the British attack on Genoa.


 * It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
 * It is stable.
 * It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
 * a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA):  c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
 * Overall:
 * a Pass/Fail:
 * a Pass/Fail:

Thankyou and congratulations, an excellent addition to Wikipedia:Good Articles. All the best.
 * Thanks for reviewing the article, Jackyd, I'll work on your suggestions! Parsecboy (talk) 11:41, 3 April 2013 (UTC)