Talk:Italian cruiser Varese/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:46, 25 February 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Pipe the link to deck (ship) in the infobox
 * Watch ENGVAR - see armor and armour
 * Good catches.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * What does Beehler say about the attack on Beirut? Might be worth checking Langensiepen & Guleryuz as well.
 * L&G is what I followed for the article; I think that I'll rework this to put the whole incident into the footnote as Beehler also says that Garibaldi and Ferrucio bombarded Beirut.
 * Whoops, that's what I get for trying to review an article at work. Looks fine to me now.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:19, 25 February 2015 (UTC)