Talk:Italian ironclad Ancona/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 04:36, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: After the comment/s below were seen to, this article checks out in terms of grammar, as well as layout as per MOS policies. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:35, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
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: The article uses a decent quantity of reputable sources, and all information included is verifiable by virtue of these sources. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:33, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
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: Looks like the article covers all relevant and verifiable aspects of its topic, in decent detail. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:27, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
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. The article maintains an unbiased approach to its subject, all throughout. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:25, 22 February 2016 (UTC) . The revision history shows that since the article's creation, it has not been the subject of any editing disputes. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:04, 22 February 2016 (UTC) : All images are public domain, so there's no risk of copyright violation in their usage here. All of them illustrate relevant concepts to the article's topic. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:58, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
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 * - I think you might have forgotten about this GAN (and these two). Parsecboy (talk) 13:21, 19 February 2016 (UTC)
 * You're right; I should get on with these. I just need to do a few other things, offline and on, and then I'll see to this very one. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:48, 22 February 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * In Service history, Admiral Carlo Pellion di Persano is referred to by his full name in both the first paragraph and the second paragraph. Oughtn't his second mentioning to be reduced to his surname, and his position as the commander of the Italian fleet to be mentioned only in the first paragraph?
 * Fixed, good catch.
 * In Design, it mentions that "Her engine produced a top speed of 13.74 knots (25.45 km/h; 15.81 mph) from 2,548 indicated horsepower (1,900 kW), making her the fastest member of her class." While I understand that the entire paragraph that line comes from is meant to be verified by citation 1, if the cite were also provided right after this line, I think it could qualify as a hook for DYK, upon this article's GA promotion. Other than these two points, everything checks out. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 11:32, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm not all that concerned with DYK, to be honest - I haven't been particularly thrilled with interactions I've had there in the past. Thanks though. Parsecboy (talk) 12:54, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Understood; no big deal. I should be wrapping this up now, however; mustn't let myself be sidetracked any longer... Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:31, 27 February 2016 (UTC)

I'd say this article is "Good" to go. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 23:35, 27 February 2016 (UTC)