Talk:Italian ironclad Ruggiero di Lauria/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ErrantX (talk · contribs) 15:25, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll be happy to review this! --Errant (chat!) 15:25, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Review comments:

I made some minor copyedits, please check them. It's a while since I did a GA Review so if it's crud then let me know! --Errant (chat!) 15:55, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Image source problem (see above).
 * The link should be good now - it's pretty annoying that these government sites restructure their pages and don't leave redirects. We had/have a huge problem when the US Navy did the same thing with DANFS last year.
 * Active/Reserve Squadron; for the uninitiated are these as simple as it sounds? Are there any links to articles that can clarify what these are?
 * Pretty much - I've tried to add as much context to explain where the source provides it (for instance, the first two lines of the last paragraph) but in writing the articles on these ships, it became clear that the amount of time the Reserve Squadron spent in service changed each year, presumably based on annual naval budgets. I don't know what the official Italian terminology is, but I could probably redlink Active Squadron (Regia Marina) and Reserve Squadron (Regia Marina), and maybe eventually get around to creating articles on them.
 * Was she sunk by the air raid? Or simply during it (e.g. by some other means)? It sounds silly but I wasn't sure, and the wording is specific which implied the latter to me.
 * Yeah, sunk by the air raid. I tried to leave it on the vaguer side, because Conway's unfortunately doesn't say who sank the ship (presumably an Allied raid, since La Spezia was in the area of German occupation after the Italian surrender) and I couldn't find anything on the ship's fate elsewhere.
 * They look fine to me. Thanks for reviewing the article! Parsecboy (talk) 12:21, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Cool, I can't find any other problems. Nice article :) --Errant (chat!) 13:43, 22 October 2015 (UTC)