Talk:Ivan Julian

Tone of article
This reads like a press release, not an encyclopedia article. I mean, I'm a fan of Julian, but this needs some major re-writing. WordsAmp (talk) 05:45, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

I’m trying to figure out what the sense is behind the clause “ The plan as always was to venture out with fresh fine and to new places,...” Jreinsch (talk) 14:36, 31 October 2020 (UTC)