Talk:Iveta Mukuchyan/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:40, 23 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * Mukuchyan's debut EP → Mukuchyan's debut extended play (EP)
 * and obtained wide reception in Armenian media → this is an example of WP:FANCRUFT; I can't find such information in the article's body
 * Their single initiated another collaboration between them, released in October on iTunes under the name Armenian Folk → Their single preceded a collaborative album, Armenian Folk (2017).
 * The Path of Our Dream, which premiered on 19 December → The Path of Our Dream in the same year

Infobox

 * The genres aren't sourced in the article's body

Early life

 * This seems on point ;)

2009–2014: Hay Superstar and The Voice of Germany

 * In 2010, Mukuchyan → In 2010, the singer
 * on the French-language → on the French language
 * In the same year, in Germany, Mukuchyan participated in a song contest → In the same year, Mukuchyan participated in a German song contest
 * In 2011, Mukuchyan was featured → In 2011, the singer was featured
 * gained wide reaction in Armenian media → just because several publications reported its release doesn't mean it gained wide reaction in Armenian media
 * In 2014, Mukuchyan was featured → In 2014, she was featured
 * and was again featured on the cover of El Style → you repeat yourself with "featured"

2015−2016: Eurovision Song Contest

 * Main articles → This should be "See also"
 * during the Eurovision season → this sounds akward

2016−present: IvaVerse and "Dashterov"

 * Armenian TV shows → Armenian television shows
 * Didn't spend much time on this; see "Outcome"

Discography

 * Dashterov collaboration → You should make a table (like for EPs) called "Collaborative albums", without showing the tracklist
 * As lead artist > Add a row for peak positions on SWE Heat, as "LoveWave" peaked at number 13 there (take this as an example)
 * For "De Jpta", the row of names is too heavy; make a break after Anahit Shahbazyan

Filmography

 * The "!scope="row"" should be on the year
 * Same for "As herself"

Awards and nominations

 * You should use the same type of table as here

Outcome

 * I'm sorry, but the article still has many issues. I can read many clipped and short sentences (an article should read as a story) along with (still) unreliable sources (e.g. Facebook, Instagram...). I think you should take more time off and work extensively with another user on this article. Again, I'm sorry, but the article is still not up there. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:20, 24 December 2017 (UTC)