Talk:J.Period

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Hi I want to improve the errors in this page, but I need help with how I can do so. It says "It reads like an advertisement and needs to be rewritten from a neutral point of view." however, the way it is written is just like Clinton Spark's wikipedia page. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clinton_Sparks) What is the difference??Nanaforever (talk) 20:49, 7 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I've removed the tag, since it had been there for some time and the article had changed substantially since. While I was at it, I also cleaned up the references a bit.  If you could still find some references for the awards and discography sections, as well as for little details like his nickname and birth date, that'd be great and would fix most of the remaining obvious issues.  Thanks.  —Ilmari Karonen (talk) 08:19, 8 May 2008 (UTC)