Talk:J. Christopher Giancarlo

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I am submitting an edit request in (I hope) what I believe is observance of Wikipedia's conflict-of-interest provisions. I see that this page has been rated as "Start-Class," and I am familiar with this individual's biography. I believe that I can assist in providing substantial improvement in content and organization.

Information to be added or removed:

New section in the "career" section, after "government service"

Following Government Service
Giancarlo is Senior Counsel to the international law firm Willkie Farr & Gallagher based in the New York office. Giancarlo serves as Chairman of the Board of Common Securitization Solutions LLC, a joint venture between Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac. Giancarlo is also an independent director of the American Financial Exchange, the sponsor of Ameribor and Ameribor Futures. Giancarlo serves on the Advisory Board of the Chamber of Digital Commerce.

Giancarlo is a renowned blockchain technology advocate and key contributor to the global discourse on cryptocurrencies and digital assets. Mr. Giancarlo is the founder of the Digital Dollar Project, to "advance exploration of a United States Central Bank Digital Currency."

Explanation of issue: increasing specificity of the article

References supporting change: Included in the text DCDJBoomKitty (talk) 03:15, 14 May 2020 (UTC)


 * I've implemented your requests nearly verbatim. A few points to keep in mind for next time:
 * Your use of external links was inappropriate and I've not added them. Wikilinks should be used; if the subject has no article, one should be written if the person is notable or else left unlinked.
 * Your use of the word "renowned" is overly positive praise and not neutral. So is "key" in my opinion.
 * Please cite everything, including his positions; chairman of the board, etc. I've done it for you this time.
 * Welcome to Wikipedia. Psiĥedelisto (talk • contribs) 02:10, 26 May 2020 (UTC)