Talk:JDS Akishio/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:48, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

I'll take this for review. Parsecboy (talk) 20:48, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

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 * It doesn't make sense, structurally, to talk about construction, then the design, then the narrative of the boat's career. It's to combine the narrative elements and leave the technical stuff by itself.
 * Watch ENGVAR - templates are putting out British spellings but American spellings are used elsewhere.
 * Check again - the infobox still has draft instead of draught. Parsecboy (talk) 12:28, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
 * What makes seaforces.org a reliable source?
 * Their about page says that all information comes from governmental or industrial sources. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  18:44, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Based on previous discussions at WP:RS/N (thinking specifically of the evaluation of Navweaps here), that doesn't make the site reliable - they would tell you to cite those sources directly. Parsecboy (talk) 12:26, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
 * I've removed it. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  20:36, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Same for sous.marins.musees.free.fr.
 * ✅ I have removed this one. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  18:46, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
 * This provides a bit of info on the controversial nature of the museum of which Akishio is a part.
 * I will work on it. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  13:58, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The image checks out, copyright-wise, but it ought to have a caption. Parsecboy (talk) 20:57, 4 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The image checks out, copyright-wise, but it ought to have a caption. Parsecboy (talk) 20:57, 4 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The image checks out, copyright-wise, but it ought to have a caption. Parsecboy (talk) 20:57, 4 August 2017 (UTC)
 * - it's been a couple of weeks - have you lost track of this? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
 * yeah I forgot about this; I'll try to work on it later today if I can. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  12:37, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Sounds good, there's no rush. Parsecboy (talk) 12:54, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done everything. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  21:03, 25 August 2017 (UTC)
 * The Logan & Reeves book is missing from the references section, and the seaforces link is still there. Parsecboy (talk) 10:23, 26 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:19, 26 August 2017 (UTC)
 * - one last thing I didn't notice before - the intro doesn't mention the fact that she's preserved as a museum ship - could you add a line to that effect? I think that's the last thing I'd like to see. Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Done. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  16:35, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Now passed. Good job on the article. Parsecboy (talk) 16:45, 29 August 2017 (UTC)