Talk:JFK Reloaded/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 10:27, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

This is an interesting topic, to say the least.
 * Does score need to be linked? It's a pretty common concept.
 * Does points need to be linked?
 * "the grassy knoll. the" → Comma instead of period.
 * "conspiracy theories surrounding the event" → Link this whole phrase instead of just "conspiracy theories", otherwise it looks like a general link to the latter.
 * "United States senator" → Capitalize Senator.
 * I don't see the need to add the ABC News and Maxim stuff, it's just clickbait-y stuff that isn't really relevant. AryKun (talk) 05:13, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you, . I believe the capitalization of 'Senator' is correct here per MOS:JOBTITLES, though I slightly reworded that bit to make the sentence more readable. I also made the other changes you requested. Regards, IceWelder  &#91; &#9993; &#93; 07:08, 21 January 2022 (UTC)