Talk:Jabari Smith Jr./GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 13:03, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * player for the Houston Rockets - missing a word here.  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 18:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * This is the standard intro sentence for professional basketball players. Newtothisedit (talk) 19:08, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Comma after Georgia.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed Newtothisedit (talk) 19:08, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * would lead the team - bit NPOV, just say he won.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Changed both instances. Newtothisedit (talk) 19:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * nations number 7 - seven as per MOS:NUM  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 18:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed Newtothisedit (talk) 19:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * 3rd - third.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:19, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed Newtothisedit (talk) 19:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

General
,against fierce rival Alabama - I don't think we need the link for rival here- it's a WP:SEAOFBLUE.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Even if you set an acronym in the lede, you also need to do it in the body (so, NBA), also need to link similarly (see basketball, NBA et al)  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed Newtothisedit (talk) 19:10, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * picked #1 by the - spell out number one.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Fixed Newtothisedit (talk) 19:11, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * fall to the third overall pick - he didn't exactly fall, he was never actually first choice, right?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Changed wording Newtothisedit (talk) 19:11, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Durant.[1][38][39][40] - three is all the cites we need. I'd either remove one, or use WP:BUNDLING to show where each cite is being used if we need them all.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Deleted one reference Newtothisedit (talk) 19:11, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Smith's father, Jabari, played in the National Basketball Association (NBA) - do we need to link NBA so late in the article?  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Done Newtothisedit (talk) 19:11, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Where is the career stats cited too?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Cited source Newtothisedit (talk) 19:14, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I've done some ref spot checks and everything seems fine referencewise.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:27, 21 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @Lee Vilenski I have fixed everything aside from the opening sentence which I kept to match the format of other basketball biographies. Newtothisedit (talk) 19:15, 21 January 2023 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 13:03, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * @Lee Vilenski Are there any problems I need to adress? Newtothisedit (talk) 00:52, 20 January 2023 (UTC)