Talk:Jacinda Ardern/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 21:09, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 21:10, 28 February 2021 (UTC) 

Lede

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A strong lede that lists the high points in the life and service of Jacinda Ardern.

Early Life and Education

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A fulsome and well referenced account of Ardern's study and work prior to entering politics.

Early political career

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Links to the Electoral History of Jacinda Ardern; examined.

Member of Parliament

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * This section references Ardern not winning seats but winning entry to Parliament as a List MP in three elections.
 * The term List MP is uncommon, and while employed in a number of sovereign parliaments, needs explanation. Reference 29 does not give any explanation of this term. Suggest a link to the New Zealand Parliament page entry on House of Representatives or to the List MP article, for clarity.

Mount Albert by-election

 * Her first electoral win, noted
 * Deputy Leader of the Labour Party, noted.

Leader of the Opposition

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * rude: Labour's sudden increase in popularity were due to her youth and good looks
 * more rude: farmer displayed a sign calling Ardern a "pretty Communist"

2017 general election

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Link to the General Election gives electoral law changes for this election; a good link;
 * mixed-member proportional (MMP) voting system and the balance of power is noted;

First term (2017–2020)

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * First term cabinet, positions and swearing in noted;
 * Peters as Acting PM during maternity leave and childbirth noted;

Domestic affairs

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * the first female prime minister to speak from the top marae. Her visit was largely well received by Māori leaders
 * declared she would never say the name of the attacker has become an international convention;

Foreign affairs

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * continue participating in the Trans-Pacific Partnership negotiations noted;
 * attendance at Commonwealth Heads of Government Meeting 2018 in London noted;
 * attend the United Nations General Assembly meeting with her infant present noted;
 * Support for Uighyr and Rohingya noted;

Christchurch mosque shootings

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * travelled to meet first responders and families of the victims noted;
 * declared she would never say the name of the attacker has become an international convention;

COVID-19 pandemic

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * "widest ranging and toughest border restrictions of any country in the world" noted;
 * her regular use of interviews, press conferences and social media as a "masterclass in crisis communication."

Second term (2020–present)

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * landslide win noted;

Domestic affairs

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * the Government would be carbon neutral by 2025

COVID-19 pandemic

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * borders would remain closed to most non-citizens and non-residents until New Zealand citizens have been "vaccinated and protected"

Foreign affairs

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * "revoke dual New Zealand–Australian national and ISIS bride Suhayra Aden's Australian citizenship" a complex situation; noted;

Political views

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Maori to decide on the retention of Maori seats;
 * wanted New Zealand to have a debate on removing the monarch of New Zealand as its head of state;
 * has voiced support for a two-state solution to resolve the Israeli–Palestinian conflict;

Public image

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Jacindamania is noted.
 * leadership following the Christchurch mosque shootings and the Whakaari / White Island eruption praised;

Honours

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * shortlisted for Time's 2019 Person of the Year.

Religious views

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * her religion and departure due conflict with human rights is noted.

Family

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * Cousins noted;
 * Partner noted;
 * Neve Te Aroha (a lovely name) noted;

Cat

 * This section is accepted account White House dogs (Clinton, Bush, Obama and Biden) and 10 Downing St rat catcher all having celebrity status

End Matter

 * 1) Is it is Broad in its coverage?
 * the cyclic rendition of domestic affairs, foreign affairs then Christchurch / pandemic sections enables a reasonable coverage of events during office as PM
 * 1) Is it Verifiable with no original research?
 * Yes, extensively referenced;
 * 1) Does the article meet notability guidelines?
 * Yes, notability as per BLP is attained;
 * 1) Does it follow WP:NPOV Neutral Point of View?
 * Yes, NPOV is maintained in coverage of this lady's life and career
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * This article started life on 28 November 2008
 * It has had 2,359 edits to date;
 * In the last 90 days, there have been 421,016 page views with an average of 4,267 daily views;
 * There have been 784 editors to the page;
 * There are 229 page watchers;
 * Article is semi-protected until November 2021 due vandalism ( expected for a national leader such as a PM)
 * Due protection and number of page watchers, this page is considered stable;
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * This article started life on 28 November 2008
 * It has had 2,359 edits to date;
 * In the last 90 days, there have been 421,016 page views with an average of 4,267 daily views;
 * There have been 784 editors to the page;
 * There are 229 page watchers;
 * Article is semi-protected until November 2021 due vandalism ( expected for a national leader such as a PM)
 * Due protection and number of page watchers, this page is considered stable;

* Hazhk * Akld guy * Schwede66 * This is Paul * Gadfium * Yarrowworks * Lcmortensen * Andykatib * Nixinova * GoodDay
 * 1) Top editors are


 * 1) It is illustrated by images ?
 * 14 images on this page;
 * images are well captioned;
 * First 3 images have Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license
 * next 3 images have Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license.
 * the next 2 images are by goverment employees and licensed in the public domain
 * the image by Christchurch City Council Newsline/Kirk Hargreaves has an OTRS permission held by WMF;
 * the next 5 images are all licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution 2.0, 3, or 4 conditions

Overall

 * For a political leader, a well-scribed and nuanced history of her rise to the top and her service to her country.
 * Politics has its argy-bargy, the ups and downs of life, and the page - particularly the references - do not shy from such coverage.

Conclusion

 * Good article. GA is placed on hold seeking resolution of List MP issue.       -- Whiteguru (talk) 00:45, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I've wikilinked the term.  Schwede 66  18:43, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Corrections noted.        --Whiteguru (talk) 19:17, 1 March 2021 (UTC)