Talk:Jack & Diane (film)

I 2nd this! Shouldn't even be allowed to be up. A complete and utter embarrassing mess!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 104.159.217.129 (talk) 06:56, 12 December 2017 (UTC)

Synopsis needs a complete re-write
The plot summary reads as tho it's been written by someone who doesn't speak English as their first language, or who's translating it incorrectly, per misuse of "earlier" for later, "gains unconsciousness," etc. Leaving this as a note for myself, as I don't have time at the moment, but it needs a full rewrite. SLEPhoto (talk) 21:59, 9 July 2013 (UTC)


 * "Jack is uncritically hit by a car"?? If nothing else, that needs to be changed.
 * Oh, but "earlier" is correct. It says "earlier" on the screen. 86.44.192.140 (talk) 23:38, 24 November 2014 (UTC)