Talk:Jack Bros.

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I like how this thing has 1 reference —Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.51.88.122 (talk) 02:39, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

Editing the first line in the premise section to include common names for the demons and to make a bit less repetitive

 * Jack Bros. follows the three Jack brothers – Jack Frost, Jack Lantern and Jack Skelton – who have traveled from the fairy world to the human world through a portal that opens every year on Halloween.

This line is not only very similar to a line in the introductory paragraph, but I feel like it's missing key information about the characters in a series context; in the original Japanese release, and in almost every other Megami Tensei game, Jack Lantern and Jack Skelton are referred to as Pyro Jack and Jack the Ripper respectively. I feel like something like this would work better;


 * Jack Bros. follows the three Jack brothers: Jack Frost, Jack Lantern and Jack Skelton. The latter two are referred to as Pyro Jack and Jack the Ripper respectively in other games in the series. The brothers have traveled from the fairy world to the human world through a portal that opens every year on Halloween.

I'd have made the edit already, but I'm not sure if this is cool with the style guide, and I'm not sure what to cite for the demons' names. The Megami Tensei wiki and Giant Bomb don't seem to be what Wikipedia considers "reliable sources." Can someone advise me here? T900Kassem (talk) 09:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)