Talk:Jack Duckworth/GA1

GA Review
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The article is good but before I can pass it, please complete a full copyedit (proofread). I made a couple of changes but there are still a few missing words here and there. Otherwise, it is in good shape.

Reviewer: Hugahoody (talk) 19:36, 4 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm starting it now. :) RAIN*the*ONE  BAM 21:32, 4 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I've started a little. Would you mind pointing out some copy edit changes I need to make please. I'm easily confused and knowing me I'll make the part with bad grammer worse. I know I'm a pain. RAIN*the*ONE  BAM 22:28, 4 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I think you've done it really. Hugahoody (talk) 22:39, 4 February 2011 (UTC)