Talk:Jack Ely/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:09, 28 August 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "best known as the singer of The Kingsmen's version of "Louie Louie"." - Reading this phrase, I first assumed that he covered the song, but then I realize that he was a member of the band. Perhaps reword to "best known for the song "Louie Louie" with The Kingsmen"
 * Changed to "Jack Ely (born September 11, 1943) is an American guitarist and singer, best known for singing The Kingsmen's version of "Louie Louie"." ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 14:05, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "Ken Ely died when he was five years old of polio of the spine, " Perhaps: Ken Ely died of spine polio when Jack was five years old,
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 14:21, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Mike Mitchell is a dab
 * Dabbed. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 17:16, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Link Red Cross
 * Linked. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 00:56, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "on April 6 at 10 AM the Kingsmen walked into the three-microphone recording studio. " - better place the date at the end
 * Reworded. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 01:10, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Just a few corrections needed. --Kürbis (✔) 12:23, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass!--Kürbis (✔) 09:38, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Just a few corrections needed. --Kürbis (✔) 12:23, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass!--Kürbis (✔) 09:38, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail: