Talk:Jack Guttenberg

Article tone
While the article does track its sources pretty well - there is not much in it that seems to be simply pulled out of the air - its tone is rather promotional, and written with what to my ear seems like a lot of marketing phraseology. I intend to go through the article and make it more objective and direct, as well as to whittle down what appears to be a bit too much detail. If I can find independent sources I will add them but so far I haven't had much luck. JohnInDC (talk) 11:10, 18 July 2012 (UTC)