Talk:Jack Mizzi

All ideas will be considered
This is my first article. I will consider any idea for improvement. ATM622 (talk) 20:54, 9 November 2022 (UTC)

I am a close relative to the subject and I strived to be neutral. Nevertheless I wish tips so that the NPOV is improved because of course the conflict exists.

Too many photographs
26 photos is probably 25 too many, even chess grandmaster Nigel Short has only three. Theroadislong (talk) 21:50, 9 November 2022 (UTC)

Fixed. Should I remove more? ATM622 (talk) 02:08, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
 * No need. Just be sure the photographs are relevant to the sections in which they appear. Many of them were not. You still need to remove inline links. ~Anachronist (talk) 00:48, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
 * All sorted. ATM622 (talk) 19:26, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

COI tag (January 2023)
The primary contributor to this article has a declared COI with the subject; the article itself is overly detailed and needs revision with respect to WP:DUE by an impartial editor signed,Rosguill talk 04:10, 1 January 2023 (UTC)