Talk:Jackpocket

Improvements
Thank you @MaxnaCarta! Wondering what you think of these most recent improvements and if you have any tips for further improving this article draft? All feedback is welcome and appreciated - thank you! StrangeChemistry489 (talk) 22:42, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

If you resubmit I’m happy to approve it now a second opinion confirms it’s okay. MaxnaCarta (talk) 04:13, 29 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Ok, great @MaxnaCarta! It's now resubmitted. StrangeChemistry489 (talk) 16:26, 31 October 2022 (UTC)