Talk:Jackson Avenue station (IRT White Plains Road Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:07, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it for a quick run. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:05, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Lead is far too short.
 * Infobox info not referenced:
 * Bx4 bus
 * ZIP code
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Rank
 * Melrose is mentioned in the lead/infobox but not in the article.
 * "November 26, 1904 between " comma after 1904.
 * "October 1, 1907 when" comma after 1907.
 * "locals were extended" does this mean "local trains"?
 * ✅ by --Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "The cutoff was removed in 1950." unref.
 * It needed 570 entries per day, but how many was "low number of entries"?
 * The document includes figures for specific months but does not average them, with 614 in 10/75, 487 pre-fire in 3/76, 390 in 10/77 and 270 in 10/80. I am not sure what you would suggest I do here.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "so more stations had no " with instead of had.
 * Station layout diagram, "Side platform" is overlinked, as is Third Avenue–149th Street, Flatbush Avenue–Brooklyn College, and Prospect Avenue.
 * "The 2009 artwork here is ..." The 2009 artwork at the station is...
 * "HABS image of th..." fragment, no period.
 * "1785 - 2006" should be unspaced en-dash, check others.
 * Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.
 * The document includes figures for specific months but does not average them, with 614 in 10/75, 487 pre-fire in 3/76, 390 in 10/77 and 270 in 10/80. I am not sure what you would suggest I do here.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "so more stations had no " with instead of had.
 * Station layout diagram, "Side platform" is overlinked, as is Third Avenue–149th Street, Flatbush Avenue–Brooklyn College, and Prospect Avenue.
 * "The 2009 artwork here is ..." The 2009 artwork at the station is...
 * "HABS image of th..." fragment, no period.
 * "1785 - 2006" should be unspaced en-dash, check others.
 * Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.
 * "HABS image of th..." fragment, no period.
 * "1785 - 2006" should be unspaced en-dash, check others.
 * Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.
 * Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.
 * Be consistent with source names, linking etc e.g. compare refs 1&2 with ref 18.


 * Due to Passover, I won't be able to do any editing from tonight until Thursday evening at the earliest. I am still committed to addressing your concerns with the article. Thanks for your patience and stay safe.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:14, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback, I have addressed most of these. In addition I added a few paragraphs to the article, mostly in relation to the station layout. epicgenius (talk) 02:23, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Cheers epicgenius. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:13, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

, let me know when you're good for a re-review. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:13, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I am good for a re review. Thanks so much.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:44, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Great, all good. Nice work all. Promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:40, 18 April 2020 (UTC)