Talk:Jacksonville (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Plot

 * 1) "but still unable to trigger her ability" Add "is" after "but".

Production
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Ratings
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Reviews

 * 1) "A.V. Club" should be "The A.V. Club", and "A-" shouldn't be italicized.
 * 2) "and "one of its finest hours" To avoid confusion, replace "its" with either "[Fringe ' s]" or "[the series'].
 * 3) "Giving the episode a 8.0/10 rating," Typo, replace "a" with "an".
 * 4) "Stegall praised Olivia's dream sequence and subsequent accusation to Walter," Replace "to" with "of".

Lead
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In conclusion
Another great article, just a few fixes and it will pass. I'll put it on hold for seven days. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
 * All fixed. Thanks very much for all these quick reviews. When I get a chance, I'll begin reviewing more of yours. Thanks again!  R uby2010   comment!  17:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Passed! Nice work! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC)