Talk:Jacob L. Beilhart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:14, 10 May 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The lead is only two sentences long. Add important aspects from his early life, the foundation of the society and the last years. Two - three more sentences ought to do.-- GoP T C N 11:01, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Blog accepted because the author is an expert
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: I copyedited the article a bit and linked some uncommon words. Otherwise the article deserves the icon if you expand the section a bit.-- GoP T C N 11:01, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: I copyedited the article a bit and linked some uncommon words. Otherwise the article deserves the icon if you expand the section a bit.-- GoP T C N 11:01, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * I've expanded the lead section. I'm always fearful that I'm including too much once I get started. I believe that I've addressed the concerns expressed above. Thanks!   Wikipelli  Talk   18:36, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Better, but the last sentence of the lead is not cited, though. Regards.-- GoP T C N 20:03, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I had left it off (per my comment on your talk page).... I've added the reference now. Thanks!   Wikipelli Talk   20:08, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, then I will pass the article! :)-- GoP T C <sub style="color:#8EE5EE;">N 20:12, 14 May 2012 (UTC)