Talk:Jade Cocoon: Story of the Tamamayu

POV-section template
Because.. look at it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 219.77.142.86 (talk) 01:04, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

Jade Cocoon
Jade Cocooon is awesome. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.46.120.204 (talk) 12:42, 9 February 2009 (UTC)

Opinion
Article should be re-written from the ground up. Lots42 (talk) 04:49, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm on it! - MK (talk/contribs) 11:05, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Assessment as of 2009-08-03
Remaining start-class: it still needs some major work.
 * First off, keep an eye on WP:VG/S for reliable sources. This'll help a lot with the article's development.
 * Dev and reception need to bulk up heavily.
 * Really the whole article needs more muscle. Build it up more, and reference it well.

Don't be discouraged by this assessment: it is off to a good start, and isn't too far off from C-class. It just needs more content and some reference checking. Good luck!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 11:11, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Ah, I'm glad I have some direction. The article was a total mess when I found it, no sources and severely POV; it probably would have gotten deleted after a while. I hope to get it up to featured some day. I'll work on the things you suggested. - MK (t/c) 18:34, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

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Source

 * https://web.archive.org/web/20000609111335/http://headline.gamespot.com/news/99_03/26_vg_cocoon/index.html
 * https://web.archive.org/web/20001017120458/http://www.zdnet.co.jp/internet/news/9907/08/news04.html