Talk:Jagdgeschwader III/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  08:20, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (14.5% is highest, due to incidental parallels.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅

Lede

 * and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of three attacking Armees. suggest you change this to and wanted to assign a fighter wing to each of the three Armees involved in the attack.
 * Excellent suggestion. Slight rewrite.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
 * not to mention frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals, suggest along with frequent changes of airfields during withdrawals,
 * Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Operational history

 * Flying was kept to a bare minimum. JG III husbanded its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive. suggest Flying was kept to a bare minimum, as JG III was husbanding its resources while awaiting the upcoming offensive.** Done.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
 * That is all of my comments, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:51, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for a speedy review.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2018 (UTC)