Talk:Jaliba Kuyateh

Legit Article
First, I would to congratulate you on this article! Great job. The only suggestion I have, other then the one missing comma, is that a few sentences are a few wordy if that makes sense. Sometimes short and sweet is more impactful and keeps the readers attention. Other than that I really enjoyed this article.

SleeepyD (talk) 02:45, 1 November 2014 (UTC)

Great Start!
This is off to a great start. You mentioned that there was a book but I'm assuming you have not entered that material yet as a reference? I think that will really help in terms of establishing notability. — m a k o ๛  22:23, 16 October 2014 (UTC)

Feedback

 * I think your article looks great! Your references and links all are wonderful. I don't think I'd change a thing! Kewall27 (talk) 03:40, 25 October 2014 (UTC)


 * The article is neat and easy to understand. Good to know more about the interesting music instrument. Phoebepoonn (talk) 21:00, 25 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Thanks, guys. Aidaja12 (talk) 04:36, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

article comments
Hey, I've got a few comments/suggestions for the article. All in all the article looks fairly good. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:49, 27 October 2014 (UTC)
 * ISBN 8191097796 may be a possible source (though it appears to be a pretty rough translation). ISBN 0226101614 also has some content. As does ISBN 9781843530831 and (finally, a non-book source!) this short article may have some content you find helpful.
 * Statements like "Jaliba Kuyateh is the most popular musician from Gambia" should be cited even in the lead. There are a number of sources and you can just reuse one (if you're in the visual editor) or create a named reference (if you're editing in the source editor) or just have one cite for that statement in the lead by itself.
 * The lead looks a bit short. For articles like this you don't need to add much, but imagine a single paragraph with 3-5 sentences) giving a short summary of everything in the article. That will flow much better with the article content as it is right now and shouldn't take too much work.


 * I would also add that I had some concerns about tone. Although it is clear that you are very excited about Kuyateh, it's important to try to maintain a neutral point of view. — m a k o ๛  23:20, 2 November 2014 (UTC)