Talk:James Crichton (soldier)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * No DABs, external links OK
 * He received limited schooling for by the age of 10, he was working in a coal mine Awkward, rephrase
 * quarter-master sergeant is the the proper spelling of this rank? Also, link it.
 * Link warrant officer, 2nd class and centenary.
 * officer training but a senior comma after training
 * His VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Crichton's VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Redundancy
 * He also married and with his wife would have one daughter. Awkward
 * If he got a service medal for the 2nd World War, then he must have served to earn it. What did he do during the war?
 * Do not just bold footnotes and citations, put them as proper lvl3 headers so they appear in the TOC.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:40, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback, I have dealt with the identified issues. That was a good catch RE the WWII service medals, I had totally overlooked that. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:08, 13 April 2018 (UTC)