Talk:James Heather

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Great work, especially with the sourcing! Some pointers: using an encyclopaedic tone means no emotional language such "traumatic" etc., and also try to add related text into larger paragraphs instead of starting a new one with every sentence.

 𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 04:10, 21 June 2022 (UTC)