Talk:James Kamsickas

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I have updated the edit request below and have signed it with my personal account, which I have just recently created. I am an employee of Dana Incorporated and am just trying to ensure that recent and accurate information is included in the articles about our leadership.

Information to be added: Prior to joining Dana in 2015, Kamsickas served as president and CEO of International Automotive Components (IAC)[1] for eight years. Before joining IAC, Kamsickas served in numerous senior leadership roles at Lear Corporation over 18 years.[2]

Kamsickas serves on the Board of Trustees of the Manufacturers Alliance for Productivity and Innovation (MAPI)[3] and the Board of Directors for the United Way of Greater Toledo[4]. In addition, he served on President Trump’s council on manufacturing and job creation[5].

On December 16, 2019, Kamsickas was elected as Chairman of the Board for Dana Inc.[6], continuing to serve as President and CEO.

References ^ https://www.todaysmotorvehicles.com/article/automotive-manufacturing-components-dana-iac-miller-kamsickas-071415/ ^ https://www.iacgroup.com/media/2012/03/29/iac-group-names-james-k-kamsickas-global-chief-executive-officer/ ^ https://www.mapi.net/content/board-trustees ^ https://www.unitedwaytoledo.org/take-action/our-team/ ^ https://www.whitehouse.gov/briefings-statements/president-trump-announces-manufacturing-jobs-initiative/ <li id="notejkFoot6">^ https://www.rubbernews.com/executive-action/dana-ceo-named-chairman-board/</li> </ol> Ateachout19 (talk) 16:37, 14 January 2020 (UTC) --Ateachout19 (talk) 17:39, 2 March 2020 (UTC)

Reply 22-NOV-2019

 * Your edit request could not be reviewed because the claims made do not contain ref tags.
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<blockquote style="background:white;width:90%; padding:1em; border:1px solid #999;">NO REF TAGS USED The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

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<li id="noteFoot01a" >^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.</li> <li id="noteFoot02a" >^ Harinath, Paramjit. (2019). "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.</li> <li id="noteFoot03a" >^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.</li> </ol>

In the example above there are three references provided for the stated claims. But the text does not indicate, through the use of ref tags, which reference applies to which claim. Your edit request similarly does not provide ref tags indicating which source goes with which part of the text. The links between material and their source references must be clearly made, as shown in the next example below:

<blockquote style="background:white;width:90%; padding:1em; border:1px solid #999;">REF TAGS USED The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,<sup id="nbFoot01a" class="reference">[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<sup id="nbFoot02a" class="reference">[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.<sup id="nbFoot03a" class="reference">[3]

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<li id="noteFoot01a" >^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2019, p. 1.</li> <li id="noteFoot02a" >^ Harinath, Paramjit. (2019). "Size of the Moon", Science, 51(78):46.</li> <li id="noteFoot03a" >^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2019, p. 2.</li> </ol> In the example above the links between the provided references and their claim statements are perfectly clear.

Regards, Spintendo  02:53, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
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