Talk:James Moore (Continental Army officer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Magic ♪piano 13:24, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

The most important issues that need attention are 2b and 3a. While the sourcing issue (2b) is serious, the lack of pre-revolution biography (or assertions that such background is unavailable) is more troubling.

I will put the nomination on hold. I'm pretty lenient about keeping reviews open if there appears to be activity addressing the issues I've raised.  Magic ♪piano 04:01, 7 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Responses from main editor: Go ahead and fail it now. I'm not sure I have much time to dedicate to making those fixes.  Yes, I agree they need to be made, but I will have to get to them at a later date.  Thanks for taking the time to review this, I appreciate the work you did in giving this a thorough review!  -- Jayron  32  04:31, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, no problem. (BTW I've recently been working on his grandfather's activities.)  Magic ♪piano 13:25, 7 April 2010 (UTC)