Talk:James Walker (Australian politician)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dana boomer (talk · contribs) 19:22, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Hi! I'll be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have my full review up shortly. Dana boomer (talk) 19:22, 25 October 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Edinburgh Institution is a dab link
 * Done.
 * Early life and career, "In 1867 he was transferred to Toowoomba, which he managed" - Was he managing the town, or the bank branch in the town?
 * Yeah, the bank. Fixed.
 * Federation, "The second session of the Convention," This sentence gets a bit long and confusing - possibly would be better split into two?
 * Done.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Overall, this is a very nice little article. A few prose niggles that I would like to see corrected, but once those are finished, the article should be good to go for GA status. Dana boomer (talk) 21:44, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I think I've addressed the issues. Frickeg (talk) 23:35, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
 * OK, everything looks good, so I'm passing the article to GA status. Nice work! Dana boomer (talk) 15:22, 26 October 2012 (UTC)