Talk:James the Deacon/GA1

GA Review
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OK, next up. I’ve made these changes including a switch to BE (centered to centred)
 * Gregorian mission who came to England – which came, if the mission is the subject
 * fixed


 * court of King Edwin of Deira to marry Edwin. – clunky, perhaps court of Edwin of Deira to marry the king or court of Deira to marry King Edwin?
 * fixed


 * Edwin of Deira is a redirect
 * fixed


 * Edwin died in battle at Hatfield against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla in 633. – ...fighting against..., or perhaps Edwin died in battle against Penda of Mercia and Caedwalla at Hatfield in 663?
 * Fixed


 * previous to Edwin's – prior to ?
 * fixed


 * for celebrated Easter – something missing here
 * fixed (it was a missing "he"


 * after this – perhaps after the synod?
 * fixed


 * Why are there two days list for this saint, especially when the October date appears to be unsourced?
 * Samuel fixed this. It's two different days for two different denominations.

No real problems jimfbleak (talk) 10:03, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Think I got them all! Ealdgyth - Talk 14:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Keep them coming! jimfbleak (talk) 16:38, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
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