Talk:Jamie Dwyer

Writing
Of the 11 sentences in the introduction, 10 begin with "he", a word used 15 times in that introduction. Please vary word usage and sentence structure throughout the article. The page will read much better. Kablammo (talk) 23:50, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

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