Talk:Jan des Bouvrie

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The article is rife with breathless hyperbole that needs to be removed. To wit: "Jan des Bouvrie...is a famous Dutch architect...With his unique and progressive ideas the young Des Bouvrie has made a huge impact..." This is not even remotely appropriate language for an encyclopedia. Interested editors -- please prune out the flowery language and add references to back up every assertion. If I have to go in and cut out the PR-speak, it isn't going to be pretty, so please do what's necessary to Wikify this article. Bricology (talk) 09:10, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I've had a go today - much better now. - Snori (talk) 23:34, 18 March 2019 (UTC)