Talk:Jane Dudley, Duchess of Northumberland/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:52, 23 October 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article for GA status. My review should be posted within the next few days. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:52, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I've decided to promote this article to GA status. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:31, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I'll try to fix wording issues. Buchraeumer (talk) 16:16, 23 October 2010 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

 * "she was successful in working the release" - "working" is not really the best word here ✅ > "achieving"
 * "who was her father's ward since 1512" - grammar ✅ > "from 1512"
 * "when London surgeons already considered an amputation" - wording ✅? > "were already considering"?
 * "he passed a week that saw no action" - wording ✅ > "he passed a tranquil week"

Accuracy and verifiability

 * Missing bibliographic details for Adams 1995 ✅
 * Page numbers for Christmas? Online version, has no page numbers (not a very long article)

Broad
No issues noted

Neutrality

 * "In October 1549 he lost his princely powers in a show-down with the Privy Council" - wording ✅ got rid of "princely" (although correct); show-down > "trial of strentgh"
 * Maintain an encyclopedic tone at all times

Stability
No issues noted

Images
No issues noted