Talk:Jane E. Parker

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Untitled
This article is useful but can be improved greatly. The subtitles were done correctly since only the first word was capitalized and they were to the point. The first sentence does let the reader know what Jane E. Parker does but if this is not the thing that she most well known for then the past achievement that she completed and is most well known should also be included in this first introduction sentence. The Education and early life section does let the reader know accurately where she obtained her studies and diplomas but they do not let the reader know who she was born to or what her interests as a child were. If more information about her childhood can be found it would be great if a short summary of such information could be added. The section where her career and research are mention is summarized well and the publications is also very informative. Overall the article's grammar does not need improvement but the article does need more information about Jane Parker in general about her life, family, and other major works. The reference section does seems to be correct.

Garciag 14 (talk) 22:32, 19 November 2016 (UTC)

Some useful information could be added
This is a good article but in some sections, more information could be very useful. For example, certain elements of her childhood could be included to help explain how she was able to be so successful in her professional life. The explanation of her childhood seems very cursory and minimalist. Barnardandy1 (talk) 15:21, 23 November 2016 (UTC) Andy Barnard