Talk:Jane Veeder

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 January 2019 and 7 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Samueltufts.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 January 2020 and 5 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): A Peresie, Nolanbarry. Peer reviewers: Mrlixiaoye, Aalmuk.

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Personal Information
Be careful about what you include in this section. Jane Veeder is a living subject, and as such, entries should respect privacy concerning personal relationships. If these are important to Veeder's life and work, make sure to cite from a secondary source, and explain why its necessary to understand the personal relationship to understand the aesthetic output (For example, "Soon after, they fell in love and their lives & art practices become influenced heavily by the other.") See Wikipedia: Biographies of Living Persons for guidance.AmyDeer (talk) 13:11, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

Very true. I have omitted that from the article. Krosen3 (talk) 02:37, 28 October 2015 (UTC)krosen3

Very good research! But I do want to see more on Jane's works. Specifics on what she did. Also, after you say "Jane Veeder" for the first time, it's better to refer to her as just "Veeder" or "Jane" through out the rest of the article (mostly, I see people on Wiki pages being referenced by their last names).Mrusen (talk) 01:44, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

Xiaoye Li
I think the structure of the article is very clear, especially the brief description. However, personally, I think some of the information still needs to update. I gonna list below. 1. Most of the information is about Jane Veeder's early life and career. I hope you could update some current information. 2. Achievements of Jane Veeder need to do more research. I think she is influential, so I would like to see how she influences art. Such as exhibitions, activities, etc. 3. I think some of the information needs more reference, I hope you could keep completing the references. 5. I hope you could make a worklist, I cannot be clear to see the artist's work. 6. If it is possible, you could put some pictures or images on it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrlixiaoye (talk • contribs) 16:37, 8 March 2020 (UTC)