Talk:Janet Clarke Hall

I'd really like to clean up this page, as much of this sounds like it came straight out of a brochure. Is anyone watching this page who agrees?--Schgooda 13:52, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

I don't think Encyclopedia entries should be entered by the marketing department either. Skunkoceros 13:00, 9 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I've removed the only copyrighted text that I could see, which was a phrase from the first page of this brochure. Jude (talk,email) 23:19, 18 May 2006 (UTC)

I edited the blatantly POV words in this article, however the overall tone is still quite POV. Any contributions to make this more encyclopedic are welcome. 61.69.248.161 17:17, 7 November 2006 (UTC)