Talk:Japan National Route 119/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ganesha811 (talk · contribs) 12:30, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi! I'm opening a Good Article Nomination review. Hoping to complete the review over the next couple of days. I'll be using the template below. This looks like a big one - sorry you've been waiting a while! Ganesha811 (talk) 12:30, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
 * , this passes GA review! Congrats to you and anyone else who worked on the article. I'll do the needful now. Ganesha811 (talk) 18:56, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

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 * No prose issues - pass.


 * Pass, no issues here.
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 * A translated title for Source 9 (from Wikisource) would be great to have.
 * Added. Pass.


 * Google Maps, in my view, is not a particularly reliable source. I see that WP:RSP shows several prior discussions which bring up the same issues I have. While I think the information in the article is probably fine, if possible, please find other sources for the facts pulled from Google Maps here.
 * Issue discussed.


 * Guinness is a similarly middling source - I think the sentence should be rephrased to say that this portion of the route holds the Guinness world record for world's longest tree-lined avenue, without implying in Wikipedia's voice that such a claim is correct.
 * Not yet addressed.


 * Issues addressed. Pass.


 * Where does the list of major intersections come from? What constitutes "major"?
 * Pass, no issues.


 * No issues found by Earwig or manual spot check.
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 * No other significant areas of the topic found. Pass.


 * Pass, no issues with overdetail.


 * Pass, no neutrality issues.


 * Pass, no issues here.
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 * For File:Utsunomiya north road.jpg, please make sure that the file information is given in the proper format, not just in the 'Summary' on Wikimedia. Other image looks good.
 * Fixed. Pass.


 * Pass, no issues here.


 * Hello, Ganesha811. Thanks for taking the time to start this review. I'll do my best to respond to your requests and queries in a reasonable manner of time, though I'm a bit busy offline so I may be a bit slow. Cheers,  ❯❯❯ Mccunicano ☕️  18:33, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting me know, I'll complete my review and then ping you. Ganesha811 (talk) 12:07, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Hey Ganesha811, MOS:RJL should clarify why I included what I did in the junction list. As for Google Maps, I had a similar query arise with another article review, but it was deemed suitable as a reference for how I used it there.  ❯❯❯ Mccunicano ☕️  17:35, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the link, that looks good for the junctions then. I'm still not personally thrilled about Google Maps, but happy to follow precedent and accept it. Ganesha811 (talk) 20:11, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
 * - I'm done with my review, just a few issues to clear up above and then we should be all set. Ganesha811 (talk) 18:07, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'll get to working on the article some more over the next couple of days. I added an alt caption to the image mentioned above, is there something else I should do in regards to it?  ❯❯❯ Mccunicano ☕️  18:15, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes - if you click through to this page on Commons, you can see that the Summary isn't well-put together or complete - compare to the other image in the article. Anything you can do to improve that would be appreciated. Ganesha811 (talk) 18:56, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've gone through and made some changes to the article and improved the details for that file on Commons (I even added some coordinates).  ❯❯❯ Mccunicano ☕️  15:43, 25 August 2021 (UTC)