Talk:Japanese Committee on Trade and Information/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yulun5566 (talk · contribs) 08:57, 28 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Use of referencing is diverse and well placed in article
 * "Its publicly stated purpose was to promote the "traditional friendship" between the USA and Japan" Sounds awkward and should be refined
 * "Obana and Townsend plead guilty, though Townsend denied that he was acting on behalf of Japan" Use of present tense is grammatically false when describing an event from the past
 * There were too much details in the article that has almost no relation with the topic itself
 * Average article on the whole, and if not refined, it would not qualify for GA


 * New editor needed to take over this review.
 * The "review" above is not in accordance with Good article criteria. Experienced GA reviewer familiar with the process needed. — Maile (talk) 16:55, 28 September 2015 (UTC)